jueves, 20 de noviembre de 2008

sábado, 15 de noviembre de 2008

ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY

New fertilization techniques make it possible for women to have babies in their fifties, or even sixties. Should they be allowed to have children at this age?

Nowadays, there are many women that her bigger desire is to be mother but there are many illness and alterations in the women body too and this do that she search new techniques for to carry her desire. However these techniques are very discussed by many authors because these techniques should allow that women have babies in their fifties or even sixties. The purpose of this essay is show the argument for and against of these new fertilization techniques.

In first place, there are many authors that are in favor of these new techniques. They are people that work in hospital where these fertilizations do because they say that despite the risk of health of these women they feel to be the happiest when they have their babies in their hands besides they say that they use techniques with minimum risk for women and their babies.

On the other hand, there are many authors that are against of these new fertilization techniques because this method brings a lot of risk for life of women in their fifties or sixties. These authors are members of ethical committee and they say that while these techniques create a new life they put in risk other life too and this is mother´s life. Furthermore the bodies of these women aren´t preparing to have a baby in these ages for this reason the babies should have alteration in their formation. Therefore the mother and baby will not be happy.

Sum up, the new fertilization techniques is a controversy aspect currently because these have for and against aspects for humanity. I think that these women shouldn´t run the risk their life in these ages, on the contrary they should have other options such as adoption.

Correction of quiz negative version:

EFFECT OF AUTOMOBILE IN AMERICAN SOCIETY


Nowadays, American Society don´t need to use automobile for transportation. For this reason large part of American people don´t has their own automobile they prefer to travel in bus, taxi or bicycle because they think that is easier the transport in this form and for the environment. The purpose of this essay is to give positive and negative effects of little use of automobile in American Society.

The first effect is positive and is smaller contamination of environment because in this society there are a few automobile because people travel at bus and those are in good condition and this is good for people health.

The second effect is negative and this is that people spend more time to come at anywhere because people sometimes prefer go on bicycle because is healthier but is slowly besides If you want travel at bicycle, you need appropriate clothes.

To sum up, little use of automobile in American Society depend of preferences of people and this have positive and negative effects.

Correction of quiz:

EFFECT OF AUTOMOBILE IN AMERICAN SOCIETY


Nowadays, American Society has created necessary to use the automobile for transportation. For this reason large part of American people has their own automobile, because they need to travel from one place towards other in a few time. Moreover the cities are big. The purpose of this essay is to give positive and negative effects of automobile in American Society.


The first effect is positive and is that the transport is more comfortable and quickly because people con travel speed that they prefer such as if somebody go to work, so he or she will drive quickly, on the contrary If somebody travel with their family, so he or she will drive slowly moreover they will be more comfortable.


The second effect is negative and this is the contamination of environment because there are many automobile that don´t be in good in good condition and this is bad for health of people too.


To sum up the use of automobile in American Society is something necessary but this has positive and negative effects for people.